I do like the revision too, but I liked the original. When he said that the character we too seperate from the background, though I see the logic behind that, I was thinking maybe that's why it's sad, because it didn't fit in... haha
It's actually from a childrens book I wrote about a little alien whose spaceship was broken and could not get home. He tried to use button's and thread to sew a new one but failed miserably. Hence the sad expression. He soon recieves a needle and a bolt of blue silk so no need to worry, he will then be able to construct a balloon and he will get back home. ;) Keep posted for more of my children's books. I am ecstatic about the tools I have been learning to use to have them come to life. :)
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I do like the revision too, but I liked the original. When he said that the character we too seperate from the background, though I see the logic behind that, I was thinking maybe that's why it's sad, because it didn't fit in... haha
It's actually from a childrens book I wrote about a little alien whose spaceship was broken and could not get home. He tried to use button's and thread to sew a new one but failed miserably. Hence the sad expression. He soon recieves a needle and a bolt of blue silk so no need to worry, he will then be able to construct a balloon and he will get back home. ;) Keep posted for more of my children's books. I am ecstatic about the tools I have been learning to use to have them come to life. :)
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